well, heres the result of me sitting on the couch since the day after thanksgiving...and i have to say page 4 and 5 were my favorite ones to do

oh, if you see any typos or have any constructive criticism just let me know. i obviously cant do any thing about the art but lettering/coloring i can change if need be.











consider a sigh of relief breathed

mini comic

this a project i did for my alternative an experimental comics class last quarter
it's suppose to be printed front and back on an 8.5 x 11 sheet of paper.



im lettering the very last page for the fletcher hanks as i type this and ill be posting it tomorrow, yay

i dont expect you to get this...

but i did this sketch while waiting around in a nail salon..anyway it in reference to neutral milk hotels album in the aeroplane over the sea...i dont know why i did this, maybe because i was bored



as far as the fletcher hank's project goes..i have 2 more pages to color/ letter then ill be finished and ill post them all in order nice and neat for you.

finished page

heres page two completed..





EDIT:
...i just caught my grammatical errors.... :-x

im not the artist of these wonderful drawings

but they were done by little children, long story but here they are


super boy..(not to be confused with DC's superboy), super sword, joker (again not to be confused with DC's The joker) and Kyran?

i took the liberty of redesigning the super boy character



well i hope you enjoyed that as much as i did.


...back to working on my fletcher hanks anthology entry!

final page

it was kind of a cop out to wrap the story up but i didnt want to spend an entire page with the conflict resolved and them just sitting on the ship

now all that is left is the coloring and what not.

....and i know they beamed down to get on the planet but for the "profile silhouette run back to the ship" gag to work they would have to actually get in the ship and fly off

i guess i should explain the story...

Space smith and Diana are traveling through space like usual when they come across a planet named Serotonin. Thats why everything looks so happy and they way they maintain their happines is by draining the serotonin from nearby space travelers thus keeping the planet alive...

but Space Smith isnt just your typical space traveler!

for the zero people who actually read this

heres what page four will look like



and here's a colored panel. for continuity sake all the entries have to use the fletcher hanks palate which is very limited but its okay im trying to go for a retro comic look and igonore the awful lettering, it's just there for a filler because i havent found the font i want to use yet

just a reminder..

these pages are without text, panel borders or color so if you are confused its alright. im here to un-confuse you

i should be updating with page four tommorow

Page three

here you go...

Second Page

here's what the second page is going to look like...

i think it looks a whole lot better than page one...

well...

now that im headed toward the end of my cold i can actually get some work done. here are the first two panels of the second page

this is going to take longer than i thought...

heres what i want the first page to look like w/o lettering or colors of course

im working on a web anthology in honor of a great man

named fletcher Hanks..well, he has many names but if you wanna read about this guy just google him, anyway here are some sketches of mine, ill be using the character named space smith.



here are some designs for space smith



and heres what i want the first panel to look like



oh and heres the original space smith



...sooo awful