Second Page

here's what the second page is going to look like...

i think it looks a whole lot better than page one...

well...

now that im headed toward the end of my cold i can actually get some work done. here are the first two panels of the second page

this is going to take longer than i thought...

heres what i want the first page to look like w/o lettering or colors of course

im working on a web anthology in honor of a great man

named fletcher Hanks..well, he has many names but if you wanna read about this guy just google him, anyway here are some sketches of mine, ill be using the character named space smith.



here are some designs for space smith



and heres what i want the first panel to look like



oh and heres the original space smith



...sooo awful